It was infinitely the best adapted, at least, to my
vein of delineation, where the thing in which my imagination
revelled the most freely was the analysis of the private and
internal operations of the mind, employing my metaphysical
dissecting knife in tracing and laying bare the involutions of
motive, and recording the gradually accumulating impulses which led
the personages I had to describe primarily to adopt the particular
way of proceeding in which they afterwards embarked.
When I had determined on the main purpose of my story, it was
ever my method to get about me any productions of former authors
that seemed to bear on my subject. I never entertained the fear
that in this way of proceeding I should be in danger of servilely
copying my predecessors. I imagined that I had a vein of thinking
that was properly my own, which would always preserve me from
plagiarism. I read other authors, that I might see what they had
done, or, more properly, that I might forcibly hold my mind and
occupy my thoughts in a particular train, I and my predecessors
travelling in some sense to the same goal, at the same time that I
struck out a path of my own, without ultimately heeding the
direction they pursued, and disdaining to inquire whether by any
chance it for a few steps coincided or did not coincide with
mine.
Thus, in the instance of "Caleb Williams," I read over a little
old book, entitled "The Adventures of Mademoiselle de St. Phale," a
French Protestant in the times of the fiercest persecution of the
Huguenots, who fled through France in the utmost terror, in the
midst of eternal alarms and hair-breadth escapes, having her
quarters perpetually beaten up, and by scarcely any chance finding
a moment's interval of security. I turned over the pages of a
tremendous compilation, entitled "God's Revenge against Murder,"
where the beam of the eye of Omniscience was represented as
perpetually pursuing the guilty, and laying open his most hidden
retreats to the light of day. I was extremely conversant with the
"Newgate Calendar" and the "Lives of the Pirates." In the meantime
no works of fiction came amiss to me, provided they were written
with energy. The authors were still employed upon the same mine as
myself, however different was the vein they pursued: we were all of
us engaged in exploring the entrails of mind and motive, and in
tracing the various rencontres and clashes that may occur between
man and man in the diversified scene of human life.
I rather amused myself with tracing a certain similitude between
the story of Caleb Williams and the tale of Bluebeard, than derived
any hints from that admirable specimen of the terrific. Falkland
was my Bluebeard, who had perpetrated atrocious crimes, which, if
discovered, he might expect to have all the world roused to revenge
against him. Caleb Williams was the wife who, in spite of warning,
persisted in his attempts to discover the forbidden secret; and,
when he had succeeded, struggled as fruitlessly to escape the
consequences, as the wife of Bluebeard in washing the key of the
ensanguined chamber, who, as often as she cleared the stain of
blood from the one side, found it showing itself with frightful
distinctness on the other.
When I had proceeded as far as the early pages of my third
volume, I found myself completely at a stand. I rested on my arms
from the 2nd of January, 1794, to the 1st of April following,
without getting forward in the smallest degree. It has ever been
thus with me in works of any continuance. The bow will not be for
ever bent:
"Opere in longo fas est obrepere somnum."
I endeavoured, however, to take my repose to myself in security,
and not to inflict a set of crude and incoherent dreams upon my
readers. In the meantime, when I revived, I revived in earnest, and
in the course of that month carried on my work with unabated speed
to the end.
Thus I have endeavoured to give a true history of the concoction
and mode of writing of this mighty trifle. When I had done, I soon
became sensible that I had done in a manner nothing. How many flat
and insipid parts does the book contain! How terribly unequal does
it appear to me! From time to time the author plainly reels to and
fro like a drunken man. And, when I had done all, what had I done?
Written a book to amuse boys and girls in their vacant hours, a
story to be hastily gobbled up by them, swallowed in a
pusillanimous and unanimated mood, without chewing and digestion. I
was in this respect greatly impressed with the confession of one of
the most accomplished readers and excellent critics that any author
could have fallen in with (the unfortunate Joseph Gerald). He told
me that he had received my book late one evening, and had read
through the three volumes before he closed his eyes. Thus, what had
cost me twelve months' labour, ceaseless heartaches and industry,
now sinking in despair, and now roused and sustained in unusual
energy, he went over in a few hours, shut the book, laid himself on
his pillow, slept, and was refreshed, and cried,
"To-morrow to fresh woods and pastures new."
I had thought to have said something here respecting the
concoction of "St. Leon" and "Fleetwood." But all that occurs to me
on the subject seems to be anticipated in the following
Preface to the first edition
_February 14, 1805._
Yet another novel from the same pen, which has twice before
claimed the patience of the public in this form. The unequivocal
indulgence which has been extended to my two former attempts,
renders me doubly solicitous not to forfeit the kindness I have
experienced.
One caution I have particularly sought to exercise: "not to
repeat myself." Caleb Williams was a story of very surprising and
uncommon events, but which were supposed to be entirely within the
laws and established course of nature, as she operates in the
planet we inhabit. The story of St. Leon is of the miraculous
class; and its design, to "mix human feelings and passions with
incredible situations, and thus render them impressive and
interesting."
Some of those fastidious readers—they may be classed among the
best friends an author has, if their admonitions are judiciously
considered—who are willing to discover those faults which do not
offer themselves to every eye, have remarked that both these tales
are in a vicious style of writing; that Horace has long ago decided
that the story we cannot believe we are by all the laws of
criticism called upon to hate; and that even the adventures of the
honest secretary, who was first heard of ten years ago, are so much
out of the usual road that not one reader in a million can ever
fear they will happen to himself.
Gentlemen critics, I thank you. In the present volumes I have
served you with a dish agreeable to your own receipt, though I
cannot say with any sanguine hope of obtaining your
approbation.
The following story consists of such adventures as for the most
part have occurred to at least one half of the Englishmen now
existing who are of the same rank of life as my hero. Most of them
have been at college, and shared in college excesses; most of them
have afterward run a certain gauntlet of dissipation; most have
married, and, I am afraid, there are few of the married tribe who
have not at some time or other had certain small misunderstandings
with their wives.[1] To be sure,
they have not all of them felt and acted under these trite
adventures as my hero does. In this little work the reader will
scarcely find anything to "elevate and surprise;" and, if it has
any merit, it must consist in the liveliness with which it brings
things home to the imagination, and the reality it gives to the
scenes it pourtrays. Yes, even in the present narrative, I have
aimed at a certain kind of novelty—a novelty which may be aptly
expressed by a parody on a well-known line of Pope; it relates:
"Things often done, but never yet described." In selecting among
common and ordinary adventures, I have endeavoured to avoid such as
a thousand novels before mine have undertaken to develop.
Multitudes of readers have themselves passed through the very
incidents I relate; but, for the most part, no work has hitherto
recorded them. If I have hold them truly, I have added somewhat to
the stock of books which should enable a recluse, shut up in his
closet, to form an idea of what is passing in the world. It is
inconceivable, meanwhile, how much, by this choice of a subject, I
increased the arduousness of my task.
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