Considers tossing out a scream for good measure, but fears
attracting the killer’s attention.
By the time Carol’s phone goes to voice mail,
Sadie’s on the porch, banging on Carol’s door. Gets no response, so
she calls Carol’s name. Gets nothing; turns, glances behind
her.
Though Sadie sees and hears nothing, every
hair on the back of her neck stands on end. Every synapse in her
brain registers fear. Her instincts tell her a dangerous predator
is within striking distance, and she’s the prey.
One thing about neighbor Carol: she’s always
home. So why isn’t she answering her phone or door? Is the killer
here?
Sadie takes a deep breath, tries the
door.
Surprisingly, it’s unlocked.
With a great sense of foreboding, Sadie
pushes it open a couple of inches and whispers, “Carol?”
There’s a scent.
Not a stench, but a smell that’s definitely
out of place.
Fearing the worst, Sadie pushes the door
completely open, takes a moment to focus…then shrieks.
It was a single shriek, more instinct than
shock, as she had a general premonition of what to expect before
opening the door. But what she sees: another note—calms her
instantly and reminds her that the killer’s first note said Sadie
would die tonight, not this morning, which means if the
killer can be trusted, Sadie’s safe for the time being. She’s also
relieved to see neighbor Carol sitting in a chair, ten feet from
the front door, grinning hideously, holding a gun.
Except that…Carol’s dead.
The knife planted hilt-deep in Carol’s chest
removes any doubt as to cause of death, but the wide, bloody smile
carved across her face, Joker-style, reveals the killer’s
sadistic streak.
The cardboard sign on Carol’s chest, held
firmly in place by the knife that killed her, reads:
You Are So Predictable!
3.
REALLY? SADIE THINKS. I’m
predictable? Wouldn’t it have been predictable to grab the keys and
run to the car?
Rick thought so.
Is he predictable too?
And is it predictable to stand out here on
Carol’s porch, staring at her neighbor’s body, debating how
predictable she’s been up to now?
Sadie thinks not.
And she doubts the killer could have
predicted she’d only scream once, or that she’s currently resisting
the urge to flee the scene.
Why isn’t she screaming and running
from Carol’s house?
Because those reactions would be highly
predictable.
But you know what wouldn’t be?
Entering Carol’s house.
Sadie does so, closes the door behind her,
locks it, and studies Carol’s body carefully, wondering, Why
would someone want to kill me so badly they’d kill my neighbor just
to frighten me?
She gives Carol a stern look. “How did you
let this happen? You had a gun!”
She walks to the powder room, locks herself
inside, figuring it’s as good a place as any to wait for Rick and
the police.
Speaking of Rick….
She tries his cell phone.
No answer.
She’d like to turn on the faucet to wash her
face, but can’t take a chance on the noise.
Wait. Noise?
Sadie laughs at the notion the noise from the
faucet could possibly matter after the commotion she made on the
doorstep moments ago. If Carol’s killer’s in the house, he already
knows where she is. She leans over the sink, turns on the faucet,
washes her face. Then checks herself in the mirror and sees a
message reflected on the wall behind her, written in blood:
Tonight you die!
Under normal circumstances Sadie would gasp,
or even scream. But her current tasks are clear: wait for help, and
remain unpredictable. She turns and focuses on the bloody message.
Was it meant for her, or Carol?
Not Carol, she thinks. Because how could the
killer expect Carol to see a message written on the wall of her
powder room? It’s not the bathroom Carol would use during the
course of a normal day.
It’s for guests.
The blood is almost certainly Carol’s, which
means the message was written after her attack, and almost
certainly after her death. Believing otherwise would mean the
killer brought someone else’s blood to the scene, and that’s not
likely unless…
…Unless Carol’s house is a killing field.
As Sadie tries to summon the courage to
search Carol’s house for bodies, her phone rings. Thinking it’s
Rick or the 911 operator, she puts it to her ear.
“Sadie?”
“Yes?”
“Tonight you die!”
4.
“WHY?” SADIE WANTS to yell, but the
killer hangs up before she gets the word out.
She presses the redial button. After two
rings, the killer answers, saying, “You finally surprised me,
Sadie. What do you want?”
“I want to live.”
“Don’t we all?”
“I suppose. But most of us don’t have to ask
permission.”
He pauses a moment. “Would you like an extra
day?”
“You’d consider it?”
“I might. But you’d have to earn it.”
“How?”
“By killing someone.”
“What?”
“You want to live another day? Kill
someone.”
“Who? Rick?”
“What made you say Rick?”
“Uh…I’m not sure.”
“You want to kill your husband?”
“No, of course not!”
“And yet his was the first name you thought
to mention.”
“I guess I figured if you know me, you must
know Rick.”
“And?”
“You’d realize how easy it would be to kill
him.”
“Why is that?”
“He’d never suspect it. Not from me, anyway.
Plus…”
“Yes?”
“He trusts me.”
The killer says, “I may have underestimated
you.”
“I get that a lot.” She pauses a moment, then
says, “Who would I have to kill?”
“Your choice,” he says. “Surprise me. But do
it before five p.m.”
“I can’t just kill some random person!”
“Then…tonight you die!”
A million thoughts flood Sadie’s brain, all
of them bad. “Wait!” she says.
“What now?”
“I’ll do it.”
“You’re sure?”
“Uh huh.”
“Say it.”
“I’ll kill someone. Today, before five
p.m.”
“You have someone in mind?”
“Are you crazy?”
“You want to rephrase that?”
“Sorry. I mean, no, I haven’t thought it
through yet.
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